아래 자소서 번역 부분 검토 좀 부탁 드립니다.
이상하거나 추가 할 사항이 있으면 조언 부탁 드리겠습니다 ㅠ
Let me introduce myself. While I have worked for 5years as a quality manager, I can adopt any division and job position by various experience in my field, such as process quality control, import inspection, and RoHS. Therefore, i think that throughout my experience, i am the best candidate in order to make the highest synergy effect on your company. i will try to do my best to be family needed for the best company
한란 2026.01.12
답변 감사합니다 근데 첫 시작 문장을 Let me introduce myself 대신 I can be a very flexible person 로 바꾸시라는거죠?
애교 2026.01.12
Let me introduce myself. 라는 말은 구어체입니다... 자소서인줄 다 아는바이니 빼는것이 맞을듯. I can be a very flexible person 이라고 하는것도 괜찮구요. throughout my career 라고 고치고, 마지막 문장은 무슨뜻인지 모르겠네요...
안찬 2026.01.12
to be a member of the family